In endings are beginnings

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The Call of the Siren was silent in the past several weeks as my mom's health turned and we lost her -- just as 2013 locked its doors and turned out the lights.

When a loss is coming, we prepare for the worst -- for the pain and sorrow. We rarely think about silver linings. That's why, aside from grief and shock, I was surprised to find myself living the circularity of myth in her last days and in the days after.

I'm talking about the kind of circularity represented by the Phoenix, or that Lisa Ohlen Harris describes at the end of her book The Fifth Season: A Daughter-in-Law's Memoir of Caregiving (Texas Tech University Press). Of her mother-in-law Jeanne, Harris writes:

I miss Jeanne. I do. We've started a new life in a beautiful place because Jeanne died and released me from caregiving. Now instead of learning side effects to medications, I am memorizing the names of the trees and mountain ranges and the April flowers springing up in my garden.

I've just pulled off my gloves and am brushing damp soil from the knees of my jeans when I hear geese. I tilt my head up and raise a hand to shield myself from the rain as I peer into the sky and see the flock overhead, winging and honking and flying free to their summer home.

Her ending pulled me like a magnet, and I wanted to share the last grafs about renewal with you, my friends, even though I have nothing else to say.

It just feels good to feel the keypads under my fingers.

For more of Ohlen Harris' ruminations, visit her blog here.

Literary exits: Nicholas Delbanco on artistic lives cut short

Like other successful contemporary novelists – John Updike, for instance, or A.S. Byatt (take your pick) -- Nicholas Delbanco is at ease as both creator and critic. In his oeuvre, several critical studies and essay collections walk alongside his acclaimed novels, including, most recently, Sherbrookes, a reconstitution of his trilogy about a Vermont family as a single work (think of Peter Matthiessen's remaking of his own Watson trilogy as the mammoth-sized novel Shadow Country).

Screen Shot 2013-11-05 at 4.20.50 PMWhether he’s writing for Harper’s or in the pages of his books, Delbanco approaches the process of creation with a careful understanding of its nuances and pitfalls that only a practiced scrivener can appreciate. His critical works include Group Portrait, The Lost Suitcase, Anywhere Out of the World, and Lastingness, which all ruminate on the nature of the writer's craft.

Now joining them is The Art of Youth, which looks at three talents whose art (and lives) ended early: Stephen Crane, Dora Carrington, and George Gershwin. The book is enjoyed a favorable critical reception (for more information, go to the links at the end of this post), and Nick generously agreed to provide some insights into his book, and its subjects, in the following exchange for Call of the Siren.

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There are so many young artists to choose from--how did you finally arrive at a book that tells the tragic stories of Gershwin, Crane and Carrington?

I did spend a lot of time trying to narrow the field and to pick those artists on whom I wished to focus.  There are some creative personalities who died so famously young it seemed redundant to write about them; others have done so before.

Like who?

Think of Mozart, Mendelssohn and Schubert as musicians, Byron, Rimbaud, and Shelley as writers, Raphael, Giorgione and Caravaggio as painters—and you’ll see what I mean.  All of them were major players; none of them reached forty—but I’d have little new to say about those old young masters.

Crane and Gershwin are scarcely unknown, and—even in the case of Dora Carrington, the least celebrated of my figures—there are first-rate biographies.  Yet I did feel I could add to the store of knowledge or opinion about my particular subjects.  Too, I wanted to write about people who are of our time though not precisely in it, and where we have the advantage of hindsight.  Between the three of them they seem to me to cover the terrain.

George_GershwinThere's so much brightness around your portrait of Gershwin, but not around Carrington and Crane.

Gershwin's the only one who really seems to deserve the question "what if" if he had lived. In fact, in your book you share that sentiment when you write about him: 

"one cannot help but wonder what would have happened next. The upward thrust of his career seemed, in effect, unstoppable--or, rather, what stopped him was death. What if, what else, what next?"

What makes him so different from the other two in his arrested artistry--was it because he didn't sabotage himself the way Carrington and Crane seemed to do?

As I say in The Art of Youth, there are three major categories or subsets of the field.  The first—as in the case of Gershwin—is when an accident (a bullet, a car-crash, in his case a fatal brain tumor) cuts short both the life and career.  It seems as though the trajectory was otherwise “straight up.”

The second is when the artist him-or-herself does so—and is, as in Carrington’s case, a suicide.

And the third, as with Crane, has to do with a lingering illness.  Like that of his great predecessor, John Keats (who died at 25 though Crane made it to the ripe old age of 28) the career was cut short by consumption.  What he might have achieved in his thirties is impossible to know.

StephenCraneFor Crane, there was no long apprenticeship. When you write that "we're in the presence of an artist at work at the top of his bent," he was only in his twenties. How do you explain his stunning, rapid maturity as a writer, his rise to write a book that even Civil War veterans acknowledged approvingly?

Crane was, to an important degree, self-taught—and stunningly precocious.  It’s hard to comprehend that he could write so persuasively about a war which was, for him, imagined; he became a war correspondent only on the strength of The Red Badge of Courage, and saw his first battle thereafter.  (Too, his real familiarity with The Bowery came after he had written, Maggie: A Girl of the Streets.)  And there was a lot of hack-work; it’s as though he wrote for cash with his left hand, for cachet with his right.

My best guess is that he was still an apprentice, though world-famous, at his death—and would have continued, had he attained maturity, to hone his art.

dora-carringtonYou make an intriguing point about Carrington--that "one cannot escape the suspicion that this particular visual artist displaced her own early ambition and allowed it, finally, to fade." Her paintings are so vigorous and glorious--why did she allow her art to fade? Why couldn't her youthful energetic art fill the void after Lytton Strachey's death?

Carrington is the most puzzling figure to me—given the great attainment of her early work.  In part, perhaps, because of her gender—she lived in a period when women had to struggle mightily to have their art acknowledged—she was full of self-loathing, self-doubt.  But she also had very high standards and was her own harshest critic; in her case, the “best” was the enemy of the “better,” and that self-censoring habit ran, in the end, amok.  We can only wish she’d found more consolation in her talent for expressiveness and had not fired the gun...

There's also a dashing young fellow, pictured with dark wavy hair on a beach at Martha's Vineyard, who enters near the book's end. Your voice, and the story of your early literary success, provide a sense of fulfillment and continuation that the other artists' stories don't have.

I’m grateful that you found the memoir-component of this meditation welcome.  Again, I thought long and hard about whether to include those pages of personal history, or whether it would seem self-vaunting and self-indulgent.

Without it, I think we'd end your book in gloom and despair. The elements of memoir that you give us there are wonderfully instructive. And hopeful.

Although the mirror no longer reveals it, I was in fact once young—and one of those fortunate children whom America enables.  I published my first novel at the age of 23, and it was well and generously received.   So I thought, at a certain point in the research on those other artists (though I’m not of course comparing my own achievement to theirs) that—if only by adjacency I could include a fourth figure.  Myself.

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Finally, about the title, The Art of Youth. We can create art in our youth, but your title seems to say (to me, at least) that we can also realize that same youthful creative vision at any age -- there's an art to it that isn't dependent on fitting into a certain age category. It also seems to point us towards your other book, Lastingness, on artists whose powers grew brilliantly in their later years.

Yes, I think of this as a kind of “prequel” and certainly a companion-text to Lastingness: The Art of Old Age.  There I wrote about musicians, painters, and writers who at least maintained and in some cases advanced their art past the age of seventy.  Here the average age of my artists at death was thirty-five.  A lot of this has to do with actuarial tables; it’s only in our recent history that thirty-five seems young.

And in some sense the question has more to do with how near the artist is to death than how many more years or decades he or she has left to live.  So I found myself asking if the career-trajectory was similar or different and, if so, in what ways.

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'I contracted myself to words': Geoffrey Hartman's luminous poetry

earthimage What happened on the eighth day of creation after God's long day of rest on the seventh?

According to poet Geoffrey Hartman, God remembered all those things he forgot to make during the first week:

On the eighth day God saw what he had not created. And it was good. And he blessed it saying: This is the silence of my breath. This is the voice in the stillness of the wind.

Creation, in other words, exists in a counterbalance with contemplation.

Hartman is a figure much to be envied. He bestrides two worlds -- as a Holocaust scholar and as a literary critic and poet (maybe that makes three worlds). And as a refugee from Nazi Germany who describes the Kindertransport in his book The Longest Shadow (ok, make that four).

8thDayThese many worlds inform his exquisite book of poems, The Eighth Day: Poems Old and New (Texas Tech University Press).

How could they not? Open this book to any page, begin reading, and immediately you'll find that you are quickly descending into metaphysical depths normally reserved for  books three times its size (this volume is just under 100 pages, including notes). History, especially in its tragic moments, echoes in these poems, along with encounters with unexpected figures, like the following one:

...I who passed over saw and told what I had seen: Once more I contracted myself to words. A clerk of bloods, as sure in his counting as the idiot voice of command...

says the Wandering Jew in "Ahasuerus." It's an extraordinary poem of reclamation and redemption for that cursed mythical figure -- here, his eternal status enables him to stand as a witness for all who perished in the Holocaust. His wandering isn't condemned or without purpose; now, he is a record-keeper, a "clerk of bloods," for all those whose memory would otherwise be forgotten.

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What you'll also find here is the presence of a poetic tradition, the grand tradition that T.S. Eliot envisioned. It moves through these poems like a pulse.

When the wind blows in these poems, the English Romantic understanding of inspiration is behind it (Hartman established his critical career with his magisterial study of 'Wordsworth, The Unmediated Vision); the Song of Songs dances lightly among the imagery of  "her lashes dark spears,/dawn at the hem of her skirt"; and a multitude of quests shimmer around the narrator of "Quest" who comes upon "another door. Rough planks/as in a country john, moldy unmarked greens."

A recent volume of Hartman's critical essays, The Third Pillar, explores a broad, formidable terrain -- ranging from biblical themes and the validity of Judaic Studies in the groves of Academe to the complexity of midrash, which is "neither literature nor commentary and yet simultaneously both," notes Monica Osborne in her view of Hartman's book for The New Republic.

But to get an appreciation of Hartman's work, you won't have to turn to this book or the Wordsworth one.

No, all that you need are just two simple things to get started: this book of poems  (which also includes helpful notes and a marvelous introduction by Hartman that manages to capture the essence of his career and concerns in a short amount of space) and a quiet contemplative moment ... like the one God probably enjoyed on the eighth day.

'You have to want the story': A.R. Williams on writing (pt. 2)

Screen Shot 2013-11-25 at 9.34.45 AM In part one of my interview with A.R. Williams here at Call of the Siren, she discussed the background of her splendid dystopian novel "The Camellia Resistance."

But something else happened in the process. She provided two interviews: one about her novel and one about the craft of writing. As all of you consider your own projects, you may find Williams' perspectives in(con)structive, too. What is her best insight on the craft of writing? For me, it's this line:

You have to want the story itself, not the outcomes.

That's a point that's so easy, in the frenetic publishing marketplace, to forget.

There's no better inspiration than the perspectives of a writer newly-emerged from a successful project. (Case in point: The letters of Walker Percy and Shelby Foote.)  That's what you'll find in the Q & A below, and I hope it helps you, my friends!

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Is this your first novel? 

This is my first completed novel. There have been other attempts at novel-writing, but this is the one that insisted I stick with it all the way through to publication. I have a couple of other things out – a novella and a collection of short stories, but those are both decidedly adult in nature.

Non-writers don't realize how labor intensive a story - whether it's a short story or full novel - can be. How long did 'The Camellia Resistance' take to write? 

I started planning the book in the fall of 2009 and wrote the first draft in November of 2009. It took another three years (and the dedicated support of my editor and best friend) to get it ready for publication.

There was a lot of rewriting involved, and the story arc for the (planned) trilogy didn't really settle into place until early in 2012. Once that became clear to me, it was a lot easier to see the first book through to completion.

When did you find the time to complete it? 

For me, wanting to write a book wasn't enough. I needed two things: the first was a story that wouldn't let me go until I'd gotten it right. And by not letting me go, I mean that [the main character ] Willow and her world were always nudging me.

Even when you weren't writing, you were still thinking about the story, right?

Yes, I'd be commuting to work and visualizing some of the scenes that served as anchors to the story - like when Willow and Ianthe ride their bikes through an abandoned and crumbling Chicago. That scene demanded that I replay it over and over again until it felt as real to me as any of the trips I've ever made to the present-day Chicago.

The second thing that kept me motivated were my early readers. My editor and best friend read the first 50,000-word draft and insisted that I keep going. I had three more friends that looked over the first draft and were adamant about wanting to know what happened next. I'm not sure I could have finished it without their investment and interest.

For anyone struggling to write a book and facing a very hectic life, what words of encouragement would you give them?

As for encouragement, there's no way around it: writing is a lot of work. It's not glamorous like it is in the movies. You don't get to the end of a draft, tap in that last period and send it to an editor who promptly sends back an invitation to their house in the Hamptons and an advance check for millions. You have to want the story itself, not the outcomes. No matter how tightly your idea is hanging on to you, there are days when you are going to hate it. But if you've got that story that won't let you go, I  think you have to trust it.

And trust yourself, wouldn't you agree?

Absolutely. Be compassionate with yourself: it's going to take longer than you think to write and it's going to be terrible in its early drafts. Make sure you've got everything you need to write, whether its keeping your book notes on Evernote on your phone so you can always have your "next thing" to write with you or keeping a pen and paper with you at all times.

Be open to surprises and mistakes, they always bring you something you didn't know was there. Write because you have to, not because you think it's going to get you something. Most books are lucky to sell 2,000 copies, so if money or fame are the source of your motivation, you're probably going to be disappointed.

Let it be terrible in the first draft and just keep going. The rewrites will be just as hard as the first draft, but at least you'll have something to work with. You can't edit a book that doesn't exist, and it simply isn't possible to get it perfect the first time around. Show up for your characters (and yourself) with as much kindness as you've got... At the end of the day, if the story needs telling, you'll get there.

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If critics don't understand it, why did Catton's book win a major prize?

Luminaries-coverThis fall, Eleanor Catton released a big beast of a novel, The Luminaries, and picked up the highest honor in literature, the Man Booker Prize  (more important than the Pulitzer or the Nobel, in my humble opinion). At the time of the prize announcement, I was spending a lot of time in hospital waiting rooms because of a sick family member. So I turned to my iPhone and decided to read the reviews and find out what this prize-winning book is all about.

What I found was very unexpected. Weird, too.

Almost all of the reviews sounded the same ambivalent notes.  A grudging admiration. Confusion. The routine Jamesian reference to bagginess. Shock over the novel’s page count (more than 800). Fault finding. Impatience. Some, like the reviewer at Salon, wrote more about herself than the book. Others seemed tentative and overcautious, like Kirsty Gunn in the Guardian.

(My old haunt, the L.A. Times, didn't even review the book — wonder how their critics managed to miss it).

I'll just say it again, my friends. It was weird. Plain weird.

And yet, and yet. In spite of the mixed response from critics, the publisher Little, Brown once again demonstrated why it is one of the few perches in publishing where lucky birds land.

And, where reviews are concerned, one -- and only One -- by Martin Rubin in the Wall Street Journal, demonstrates what a good review should do.

His review's very last graf is worth quoting because it accomplishes so much  -- a description of one of the novel's main features (astrology) along with an unobtrusive mention of William Butler Yeats and a sly, passing reference to Jonathan Safran Foer in the very last line:

One especially puckish feature of "The Luminaries"—and one source of its title—is the astrological theme that runs through it. Ms. Catton offers runic charts with signs and astrological "houses" for characters and events. We are shown, for instance, for March 22, 1866, "The House of Self-Undoing," a wheel carved into 12 parts, each for one of the town's worthies. One is again reminded of Yeats, with his own charts and astrological mysticism. Yet Yeats was in earnest, while Ms. Catton appears to use the star-mapped sky as an occasional, even ironical, form of commentary, as well as an ornament to her already elaborate plot and mix of characters. In this marvelously inventive novel, nothing is quite what it first appears to be, but everything is illuminated.

In his review, Rubin wears his erudition easily, his turns of phrase are graceful and smooth, and he doesn't moan and groan as the other reviewers do. Full disclosure: Martin was once one of my regular, go-to reviewers while I was in the paper biz. I always felt that I could depend on him for an elegant, appealing read, even when editorial space was severely limited. It was good to see his Catton review because it made me realize, with a smile, that the bloke hasn't lost his touch.